King and Queen of high school

King and Queen of high school

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JokeRxHarleY By SpicyStuff420 Updated Sep 26

Harleen Quinzeel is a new student at Gotham high. She has know idea the roller coaster of emotions that's in store for her

It's supposed to be a Brooklyn accent but most New Yorkers like me don't sound like that
Sorry if there is a few spelling error i wrote this late at night and forgot to revise it
DeadQuinnn DeadQuinnn Aug 27
Constructive feedback time: the idea that you had for the dialogue was good, but you could the actual dialogue so its more detailed and so we can get a better idea of how the characters really are
I know most people don't like long chapters  just because their long, but actually if it's more detailed people will like it more. This is great by it's self, but it would be better if you put more detail into it. PM me if you need me to be clearer.
DeadQuinnn DeadQuinnn Aug 27
And right at that last sentence, u can stretch that out a lil more like say what she likes specifically about the crazy ones
This take on their story is amazing! love it. I have my own version of Joker and Harley's story it would mean so much if you could check it out!  
                              
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