A Cinderella Twist

A Cinderella Twist

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Moni By emojimojo Updated 7 days ago

During the town's annual Cinderella Ball hosted by Danny's family, Danny is hoping to find the one who can save her from her life that is darkening by the minute. But what she didn't expect to happen was to meet a mysterious young man her age who brings out real happiness from her. 

So, what happens when the clock strikes midnight and her mysterious savior disappears but leaves a part of him behind? Well, it's a chase after her happiness and only hope. And through it all, Danny laughs at this sudden Cinderella twist. 

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drowninginmaplesyrup drowninginmaplesyrup Oct 04, 2016
First of all, your introductory is flawlessly on point, along with you cast, and I just love your name.❤
drowninginmaplesyrup drowninginmaplesyrup Oct 04, 2016
Okay, first off 😍❤😍❤😍, and second, I totally read the sentence with the word 'cock' wrong as in MY before it and had to reread it and was just like wtf?
lethologicas lethologicas Oct 04, 2016
And I really like the way you included the poker face thing...
lethologicas lethologicas Oct 04, 2016
Okay........ Her mum better have a good reason for being so snappy
lethologicas lethologicas Oct 04, 2016
I did enjoy this very much and I look forward to reading the rest...  Maybe that dark eyed guy will make an appearance again
pandalee528 pandalee528 Nov 09, 2016
You've got a great start for characters. The text can get a bit choppy at times but you sure do know how to make me laugh 😂