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indiana jones. [peter pan]

indiana jones. [peter pan]

33.6K Reads 2.6K Votes 81 Part Story
liza By w0nderwriter Completed

the tale of a lost girl who never stopped chasing after the truth, no matter how hard it tried to run away from her.

started: nov 2016
finished: april 2017

il_rose il_rose Aug 27, 2016
Ok, is it just me or did that sound selfish?😒 Like I just started reading the book and I'm sure that you, author, weren't trying to send that kind of vibe. So, I really hope you don't see this as a hate comment, it was more like an opinion kinda comment.
                              Btw very descriptive, Nice😉👍🏻
serenitiez serenitiez Aug 26, 2016
i absolutely love the idea of you merging indiana jones with once upon a time it's such a good twist. indiana jones is one of my favourite films and i'm so excited that you came up with this idea. you're writing is also amazing and i honestly can't wait to carry on reading :D
il_rose il_rose Aug 27, 2016
Absolutely, positively...Beautiful❤️ just beautiful. How relatable can this paragraph get?
il_rose il_rose Aug 27, 2016
If he was as hot as he was now, for being alive for like...200 years? (Guessing) then imagine how cute he was when he was merely a child. Or when he was a munchkin.🤔😍
Just realized that Indiana is killians sister. Brb gonna die
il_rose il_rose Aug 27, 2016
His father is begging to anger me.☹️
                              It's bad when I start hating fictional/real people. It'll get ugly.☹️ Better watch your back Papa Jones or Ima Comin for ya.😠👉🏼