Travel Diary

Travel Diary

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Allen Lau By allenlau Updated Oct 01, 2014

This is a collection of my poems.  Each poem is dedicated to a city that I traveled to.

Voyageavecmoi Voyageavecmoi Jun 01, 2016 12:24PM
You create a complex image of the city and it works really well. Enjoyed the concrete forest line. Sadly, I can see that rich poor description applying to many cities I've visited too.
Oliver8 Oliver8 Aug 23, 2015 03:58PM
Loved this poem. Great first line! I especially like how you set the atmosphere and tone with a specific lexis. I am so excited to read the other poems you have written!
lievadiar lievadiar Aug 14, 2015 02:50AM
hi Mr. Allen, good morning! It's 9.50 am in Indonesia :)
                                    I'm suprised read the tittle -Jakarta- 
                                    I'm happy that you create something about my country, Indonesia. Love it!
It's Ramadhan again next week, maybe someone in Jakarta will live out this poem and make life imitate art?
sloanranger sloanranger Sep 30, 2014 06:41AM
I love your travel poems - traveling is one of my dreams :)))
AliceMorris7 AliceMorris7 Apr 15, 2014 11:04AM
great poem loved how you described both sides the rich and poor. your words help get a picture of the place in my mind although I have never been there.