This is a collection of my poems. Each poem is dedicated to a city that I traveled to.
You create a complex image of the city and it works really well. Enjoyed the concrete forest line. Sadly, I can see that rich poor description applying to many cities I've visited too.
Loved this poem. Great first line! I especially like how you set the atmosphere and tone with a specific lexis. I am so excited to read the other poems you have written!
hi Mr. Allen, good morning! It's 9.50 am in Indonesia :)
I'm suprised read the tittle -Jakarta-
I'm happy that you create something about my country, Indonesia. Love it!
It's Ramadhan again next week, maybe someone in Jakarta will live out this poem and make life imitate art?
I love your travel poems - traveling is one of my dreams :)))
great poem loved how you described both sides the rich and poor. your words help get a picture of the place in my mind although I have never been there.