Samut Nalir's Miraculous Elixir of Life

Samut Nalir's Miraculous Elixir of Life

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Rachel By Rachel24601 Updated Mar 31, 2011

Samut Nalir has never had a problem with taking people's money through any means, honest or not.  To him, it's nothing more than a way to make a living, and he's very good at it.  So when he sells a fake elixir of life to an unwary customer, he never could have expected the trouble it would land him in, and never would have dreamed that he'd have to work so hard to save his own life.

Shoot_the_Moon Shoot_the_Moon Jun 20, 2011 03:40PM
Awesome. This is well written and creative, and I need to go read more. Great job!
Hope-Adon Hope-Adon Jun 15, 2011 02:19AM
You're very talented at painting a vivid picture, I could picture the scene in my head. And the dialogue was superb. I'm curious to know who will survive, will keep reading!
Emeternity Emeternity Jun 13, 2011 03:49PM
Very well written, and very good description. *voted for sure
Mainwig94 Mainwig94 Jun 11, 2011 11:29PM
wow INCREDIBLE use of conversation. i really like the hand maid haha. I wil definitely keep reading! voted for sure
Rachel24601 Rachel24601 Jun 11, 2011 12:50AM
@KatyStClare Well, it's not actually set in the Middle Ages.  It's fantasy, so it's whatever and wherever I choose to place it, and I happened to go for a medieval-ish world.  You'll notice later on that the cities they mention aren't real places, either. :-)
RimUranium RimUranium Jun 10, 2011 10:53PM
Tranald is a very unusual name but I like it :) the descriptions are very good and I like the whole historical Kings and Queens and villages aspect :) It's interesting!! Good work <3 voted