Ayana: The Journey

Ayana: The Journey

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GEETHR75 By GEETHR75 Updated a day ago

Captured by an evil that had been stalking her since her previous life, Sita's only hope of rescue lay in her husband's love and tenacity. But an ocean lay between Rama and her prison. And the lord of Lanka was prepared to sacrifice his entire race to keep her.... 


A/N: This is something I wrote long back and self published. Just thought I would post it here. Please comment and give honest feedback. I will be updating every monday and friday

Ravana's Pov is perfectly written....... Great start... Looking forward to read more
Chaandreyee Chaandreyee Aug 19
The confrontation between the brothers is intelligently portrayed. The love Vibheeshana has for Ravana's is disarming, as is Ravana's hatred for Vishnu, appalling. Both have their own reasons. Both are kinda correct if seen from their POVs.
I had never known of the lore of Ravana and Vedavati, but of course, I know now. Also, the crispness of your storytelling has always amazed and awed and inspired me. And this one is so unique! :) Eagerly waiting for Friday for the next part! :)
Chaandreyee Chaandreyee Aug 15
Great to see this story on Wattpad. I had read it on my Kindle app quite a time ago.
                              Will love to read again and get to comment on my thoughts about each chapter.
                              And the cover us very beautiful. :)
Brilliant chapter!!! Liked the conversation between Ravana and Vibhishana
Chaandreyee Chaandreyee Aug 15
Ravana's feelings about Vedavati and Vishnu are so well portrayed.