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Seemingly Unseen  REWRITING|

Seemingly Unseen REWRITING|

2.5K Reads 223 Votes 2 Part Story
• s • By feignedsouls Updated Feb 20

highest rank: [#178-2k16]
rewritting & republishing :)

❝just because you didn't see it, doesn't mean you didn't know it before.❞

Listy3 Listy3 Feb 20
Your descriptions have DRASTICALLY IMPROVED and I LOVE where this is going!!!!
Jacklyn Jacklyn Oct 18, 2016
Why wouldn't you run, better than staying in the hell youre in!
LiveInBlackAndWhite LiveInBlackAndWhite Nov 04, 2016
Really interesting beginning and the way you write pulls the reader into the story as if you are the main character, very good
Dovey seems to be some sort of villainish creature hmm...let's see :)
this is so lit! like Skye wyd?!?! my heart is mesmerised with this beauty. the writing is so so so so gold. and your descriptions are my new romantics ;))) eeeeeeee
"they would never know i loved them" this line is my life. this is so pure and hits me straight to the heart.