Seemingly Unseen |ON HOLD|

Seemingly Unseen |ON HOLD|

2.3K Reads 636 Votes 11 Part Story
p e a s By feignedsouls Updated Oct 16, 2016

Choices can lead you to many terrible things in life. And that's what breaks everyone. 3 young people,  Avalon, Chase, and Dove go through a chaotic past in their magical worlds, but is pushed into a world of normal where their memories of anything before is gone. They soon are told that their purpose on this strange, normal land is to bring back their magical world by killing the evil queen. Was there really an evil queen? Was there even a magical land? But they have no leads whatsoever and no memory. How can a 3 young teens reach out for something that may not really exist?

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Jacklyn Jacklyn Oct 18, 2016
Why wouldn't you run, better than staying in the hell youre in!
Rooty2000 Rooty2000 Oct 28, 2016
I'm officially hooked this is so so so so so so fuxking good
LiveInBlackAndWhite LiveInBlackAndWhite Nov 04, 2016
Really interesting beginning and the way you write pulls the reader into the story as if you are the main character, very good
Jacklyn Jacklyn Oct 18, 2016
:-( nobody should see that!! That would traumatise me no doubt
confusingthoughts- confusingthoughts- Oct 24, 2016
Wow!!!! This is a brilliant prologue that has amazing descriptions and it really makes you wonder what is happening?!?
Jacklyn Jacklyn Oct 18, 2016
Such a horrible thing to happen, especially to a young child.