Crossing Over

Crossing Over

10 Part Story 9.5K Reads 371 Votes
Asia B By xXAbbyDawnXx Updated Dec 29, 2011

Zoey and her boyfriend Jimmy used to have it all. They were in love, they had a great relationship and great lives. But then Jimmy died and Zoey's world fell into pieces. She decides she must see him again and makes the life altering decision to cross over to the Halfway World, where she finds that their being together won't be so simple. Soon they're on the run from forces that Zoey's suddenly not sure their unbreakable love can withstand.

A really interesting plot, and well-written. Her feelings were described really well, and I'm voting for that.:)
AgentGalini AgentGalini Dec 29, 2011 07:27PM
It was short, but really meaningful and sad. Beautifully written, with clear details, and it surely made me sad about Zoey. Great job :)
k8ybug k8ybug Dec 29, 2011 07:24PM
wow this is an amazing intro/ first chapter! i like the last sentence~ quite great
Chikitaloca911 Chikitaloca911 Dec 29, 2011 07:23PM
I really love how creative this is. I'm wondering what inspired you? 
                                    You write amazingly well by the way :)
xXAbbyDawnXx xXAbbyDawnXx Dec 29, 2011 07:22PM
@thatcrazybookworm Thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it!
xXAbbyDawnXx xXAbbyDawnXx Dec 29, 2011 07:21PM
@cincywestgurl He is, in fact dead! He is however, in the halfway world, which, as stated in the story is the place between life and death, and he's stuck there. I hope that cleared up some of your confusion...