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Iron Angel | Before Story

Iron Angel | Before Story

20.1K Reads 2.5K Votes 50 Part Story
gidchang By gidchang Completed

Q: Would you date an AI? I don't know. But young Kardusenn with the cutest and most annoying AI implanted in his robotic arm, is considering about it...
              
Highest rank #83 in Fantasy (2017/04/17)
Highest rank #11 in Adventure (2016/10/17)

  Special thanks to @llaugh who helped me create this awesome cover and @ArbreEcore
  who's been my best friend and helped me edit ( *^^)o∀*∀o(^^* )
          
  *All contents of the book is pure fiction, and has nothing to do with real life religion, organisation, race...etc
          
  Disclaimer: I do not own any of the images inside the chapters or quiz, and all credit of art and work goes to those owners (*^‿^*)

butterballporkbun butterballporkbun Dec 26, 2016
 #ALBC
                              
                              So this beginning was very interesting and I believe it should honestly be the first thing your readers see instead of a quiz. Quizzes are usually saved until after the book
My_life32 My_life32 Nov 22, 2016
I could really related to him in the beginning. I like that you also add some action in the first chapter. Your description was good throughout the chapter. It was some typos, but it's nothing like a good edit could fix. Some paragraphs were rather long though.
I'm liking this story so far.  Great job on the action scenes, and levels of emotion.  Well done.
freefrightner freefrightner Nov 18, 2016
the starting of the story is really great I cant wait to finish reading the story
jabdulkader jabdulkader Oct 24, 2016
Whoa...i literally love your descriptions..from his emotional turmoil to the action sequence...way to go!
JaxonBlacc JaxonBlacc Oct 18, 2016
 #Inklings
                              Nice chapter. I got the sense of anime you potrayed. But I think your strongest attribute was the emotional part of the MC, which you conveyed it nicely. Hope you'll work on some of the confusing parts I highlighted.