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Iron Angel | Book 1 of Iron Angel

Iron Angel | Book 1 of Iron Angel

17.3K Reads 2.4K Votes 50 Part Story
gidchang By gidchang Completed

In an alternative world, where both magic and mech-suits coexists, Kardusenn loses an arm for his secret crush who never even thanked him back. Now equipped with a robotic arm and an annoying AI that looks identical to his secret crush; all this was only the beginning of his new life...
  Highest rank #11 in Adventure (2016/10/17)
  Special thanks to @llaugh who helped me create this awesome cover and @ArbreEcore
  who's been my best friend and helped me edit ( *^^)o∀*∀o(^^* )
  *All contents of the book is pure fiction, and has nothing to do with real life religion, organisation, race...etc
  Disclaimer: I do not own any of the images inside the chapters or quiz, and all credit of art and work goes to those owners (*^‿^*)

butterballporkbun butterballporkbun Dec 26, 2016
                              So this beginning was very interesting and I believe it should honestly be the first thing your readers see instead of a quiz. Quizzes are usually saved until after the book
My_life32 My_life32 Nov 22, 2016
I could really related to him in the beginning. I like that you also add some action in the first chapter. Your description was good throughout the chapter. It was some typos, but it's nothing like a good edit could fix. Some paragraphs were rather long though.
I'm liking this story so far.  Great job on the action scenes, and levels of emotion.  Well done.
freefrightner freefrightner Nov 18, 2016
the starting of the story is really great I cant wait to finish reading the story
jabdulkader jabdulkader Oct 24, 2016
Whoa...i literally love your descriptions..from his emotional turmoil to the action sequence...way to go!
1223pulip 1223pulip Nov 18, 2016
Recheck that sentence like you are saying sai"what the hell do you think are doing myself