Falling for the new guy...did i mention hes a jerk! [ ON HOLD ]

Falling for the new guy...did i mention hes a jerk! [ ON HOLD ]

23.4K Reads 760 Votes 23 Part Story
leanne By leannee-xo Updated Aug 24, 2010

This story is a supernatural love story with a twist.Carlie is a normal teenage girl, living with her siblings since her parents died. carlie lives the good life shes got the money, the body and the popularity but her world quickly changes when she meets the new mysterious guy Tyler. Tyler is drop dead gorgeous but all is not what they seem with Tyler. As Carlie is put through some horrible events she is forced to flee with Tyler for safety, but is being with Tyler her safest option? and will she be able to protect her family from a supernatural threat? Read to find out!

leannee-xo leannee-xo Jul 21, 2010
@Just-Nikki  hey thanks for the advice , i forget it was all together like that..whoops:L anyway its fixed nw, im gona do the rest too :)
Just-Nikki Just-Nikki Jul 06, 2010
You should space it out more so it is easier to read, not a bad start. ;)
xxKARMAxx xxKARMAxx Jul 05, 2010
This is amazing so far! However, it's alot easier to follow conversations if you put each new speaker/change in speaker on a new line instead of in the paragraph.
                              Once again...amazing!
                              
                              xx
tellmegoodbyee tellmegoodbyee Jul 03, 2010
like it alot so far. please check out my new story group called stories that make me mad. it just made it to the whats hot list!!! #454 lol. but its still the list! =)
Haileystewartbeastie Haileystewartbeastie Apr 18, 2010
It's great! Keep on writting do u like mine 'i'm pregnat with my boyfriends BEST FRIENDS baby!!' lol could you read it for me
                              
houseofnight4eva houseofnight4eva Apr 05, 2010
OH MY GOSH  this rocked like crazy!!!!!!  ur sooo goood at this!! plzzzzz write more!!!