I Can't Explain This Feeling (BoyxBoy)

I Can't Explain This Feeling (BoyxBoy)

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ronnie By iridescent_flower Updated Apr 08, 2012

Sixteen year old Christofer Evans wanted nothing but to have his parents back together but once he meets Cole, it's not the same anymore. Cole may be heartless and cold to Christofer but there's something inside of him that interests Christofer. At a new high school, Christofer struggles with life and his heart. Just what could be so interesting in the life a sixteen year old homosexual who's crushing on someone that doesn't like him back. Or do they?

iswearidontbite iswearidontbite Mar 20, 2011
Nah, it was pretty interesting. One thing though: you've mixed up past and present tenses in some bits (and I care). Besides that...well, what happens in the confrontation is coming up so let's go!
iswearidontbite iswearidontbite Mar 20, 2011
This is pretty good :)
                              I can't comment much just yet as nothing much has happened...so onto the next chapter!
NeverDuplicated NeverDuplicated Feb 21, 2011
OMFG.!! his name is spelled lyk Christofer Drew.!!!! ok i had mii weird prepy girls momment. im done.
iridescent_flower iridescent_flower Jan 19, 2011
@BraldWicca lol everyone loves everyoneloves97's pic and thanks :D
BraldWicca BraldWicca Jan 19, 2011
I think it was exciting and I look forward to what he will do next