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Amourshipping: Loyalty Seems Hard

Amourshipping: Loyalty Seems Hard

34.5K Reads 905 Votes 16 Part Story
Satosere By amourshippingz Updated Apr 06

Betrayed. All Ash felt at the moment majority of his friends and family turned their backs on him after they heard the rumour about Ash. His Loyalty was broken with his parents and his friends. Ash felt alone. Wanting to suicide but his true friends kept him safe. They disappear for two years. Two years later, Ash gets invited to a special tournament for trainers who have won the league or any Pokémon performances/contests. His hidden power is unleashed, and attracts a forgotten power towards him, which could be the helper or destroyer of humanity. His old friends are there to witness this ancient power. 

Eyes are all on Ash as his mysterious power gets stronger and stronger. Soon the truth starts to unravel itself, causing friends to turn on friends and family turn on their family. Loyalty began to get hard after the forgotten power is unleashed again...

It's an awesome start for the book!!!! I just hope it's great till the end!!
You know what we do to kids trying to kill their siblings. We burn and skin them alive 😈😈😈😈
Minkman8208 Minkman8208 Dec 28, 2016
WHAT KIND OF DRUGS CAN YOU TAKE TO MAKE YOUR POKÉMON STRONGER
Pokerenegade Pokerenegade Dec 30, 2016
Ha, fak you and that! I have a lv. 75 Pidgeot bitch! And it took down Diantha itself!
IanKhoo8 IanKhoo8 Jan 26
Not the greatest of first chapters, a few capitalization errors and your plot was completely rushed.
                              
                              Maybe an  explaination of what's going on and setting up the plot instead of just rushing things trough would be more ideal.
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