The hidden

The hidden

347 Reads 9 Votes 6 Part Story
Ninja Meggyasaurous Rex. By MeganCruey Updated Jan 02, 2011

Belle is always in trouble. But at her new school, she really does try and fit in. But things keep breaking around her, thing keep going wrong. She has been there three months and she starts hearing voices. She has to escape. So, she runs away, and what she finds will alter her for ever.

katiebeth_love katiebeth_love Jan 30, 2011
The writing isn't perfect but it seems pretty good so far. It seems interesting, but I found myself sort of skimming. An idea that I would give you is to slowly reveal information about the situation instead of introducing everything right away. However, it was good! Some really nice details. :)
MeganCruey MeganCruey Jan 01, 2011
please, if your reading this and you like it, comment and tell me.