No girl has ever been able to come before skating but Oliver can't breathe when she's so close. HIs parents don't approve after his moms first meeting of her, but he just can't resist her.
For the 1st chapter it's pretty nice.
I think it needs to be a little more informative about who is who, but that could be told in the next chapter, too.
Hey good story! Would reccomend more development of the characters:)
@Sabrina3 Yes, it's not designed to be offensive, the people this is based off of talk like that, which is why it's PG-13
I'm loving this story!!!
I like how you give all the background information
you are real good at doing first person! I am rubbish at doing first person so I admirer you! :D :D
Thanks so much for reading it and I'm honestly not a big skating fan either, I'm using my boyfriend to help me in this (: Thank you though :D