Skate: A Love Story

Skate: A Love Story

1.7K Reads 14 Votes 6 Part Story
Keishalyn By KeishaAgain Updated Jan 11, 2011

No girl has ever been able to come before skating but Oliver can't breathe when she's so close. HIs parents don't approve after his moms first meeting of her, but he just can't resist her.

LilacAge LilacAge Mar 23, 2011
For the 1st chapter it's pretty nice.
                              I think it needs to be a little more informative about who is who, but that could be told in the next chapter, too.
lucky97 lucky97 Mar 23, 2011
Hey good story! Would reccomend more development of the characters:)
KeishaAgain KeishaAgain Dec 30, 2010
@Sabrina3 Yes, it's not designed to be offensive, the people this is based off of talk like that, which is why it's PG-13
MusiqLyriq MusiqLyriq Dec 30, 2010
I'm loving this story!!!
                              
                              I like how you give all the background information
CanWePretend CanWePretend Dec 30, 2010
you are real good at doing first person! I am rubbish at doing first person so I admirer you! :D :D 
KeishaAgain KeishaAgain Dec 30, 2010
Thanks so much for reading it and I'm honestly not a big skating fan either, I'm using my boyfriend to help me in this (: Thank you though :D