Destiny of a vampiress

Destiny of a vampiress

657 Reads 15 Votes 3 Part Story
Sandii33 By Sandii33 Updated Jan 09, 2011

What would you do if you found out you aren't who you think you are?
What if you found out certain things weren't just myths and legends?
How about if the only people you could trust has lied to you about everything your whole life?
Well Sofia is about to find out. In a would full of secrets, hate, blood thirst and murder (as well as broken hearts) and the people you love most disappear, 
What would you live for? What would you do?

- - Jan 16, 2011
I LOVE THIS STORY!! Not even joking!! Please keep writing otherwise I will be very mad!! Off to Chapter 2!!!
Sandii33 Sandii33 Jan 12, 2011
@x0XjamieeX0x  thank you so much  for reading! :) i know the grammer sucks but i got the free trial of word but it isn't editing it and telling me whats wrong :( 
                              
                              
                              Votes are good :D
                              
                              ps @GUMBiiE yehh word doesn't like me :(
x0XjamieeX0x x0XjamieeX0x Jan 11, 2011
This is a good start, and really interesting. I like the bit at the beginning- it leave you wondering. There were some missed capitalization, and some awkward wording-  but nothing major. I liked it, and voted !
                              
                              Keep writing!
                              
                              -jamiee
                              :D
GUMBiiE GUMBiiE Jan 09, 2011
@Sandii33 oh, try getting the free trials?
                              
                              If I find any other editing thing online than I'll let you know :)
Sandii33 Sandii33 Jan 09, 2011
@GUMBiiE  yay! :)  haha i seriously forgot about the i's lolz.
                              
                              word costs money :( i dun has money :(
Sandii33 Sandii33 Jan 09, 2011
@GUMBiiE  THANK YOU FOR READING :) what i really need is some sort of editing thing.  And thanks for the help! I'll remember for the future! 
                              
                              and maybe... could you please...  keep giving advise? *puppy dog eyes* hehe ;)