The Wolves and I (LONG HIATUS)

The Wolves and I (LONG HIATUS)

1.7K Reads 258 Votes 9 Part Story
RAY By iamtheshreya Updated Oct 16, 2016

"It is foolish to fear what we have yet to see and know"
   
  Raelyn Winston is an eighteen year old girl, whose life is about change drastically. Her only family is her elder sister Judy. After some financial issues pop up, Judy's newly engaged 'fiance' Antoine, asks both the Winston sisters to move in to his house. After moving in, Raelyn sees HIM, the face which she never wanted to see again but on the contrast, wanted to ask him some pending questions boiling up from their past.
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  Shawn Corni is returning back to his pack, Dark Sky, after completing certain rituals and excelling competitions, to rightfully become the Alpha. But he never expected to meet HER. Infact, he never thought, that he would ever meet her again in his life. 
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  What has destiny gotten for Shawn and Raelyn? What is exactly that one secret, that 'everyone' is hiding from her? Why has Raelyn's old pal become so cold towards her? Read on to find out! 
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- - Nov 07, 2016
Hey. I noticed you don't space your paragraphs :) it makes it a lot easier to follow the book/read if you did 😊 but it's fine either or and it's good so far👍
hammy5718 hammy5718 Sep 02, 2016
So not just down the family bloodline you can be an alpha. L love the change. You don't at it that way very often.
hammy5718 hammy5718 Sep 02, 2016
Having been together for such a short time, it seemed a little strange to me for him to want to pay her sisters college tuition.
dianahastings6 dianahastings6 Aug 30, 2016
Shreya this is a really nice one.. publish the next chapter already
                              -Tanishka
Crazykk532 Crazykk532 Sep 01, 2016
But overall it's a good start
                              You have the basics of the story down, try adding more detail to the story (appealing to one of the five senses).
Got2BeReal Got2BeReal Aug 19, 2016
Can't wait to see were your going with this story! (and yes the pun was Intented lol)