The Ugly Creature - #TNTHorrorContest

The Ugly Creature - #TNTHorrorContest

519 Reads 64 Votes 1 Part Story
Josh Saltzman By JoshSaltzman Completed

Who's the ugly creature?

  • creaturefeature
  • tnthorrorcontest
bloodandfullmoon bloodandfullmoon Sep 09, 2016
Congratulations on becoming a finalist!!! Good luck on the voting XDXDXD
rynnetgreenwood rynnetgreenwood Aug 10, 2016
Ah, a new story! It's always good to see more works from you, Josh! Is this connected to Strange Yarns?
Perci_Snickedy Perci_Snickedy Sep 08, 2016
Congrats on being a finalist!
                              
                              This was interesting. I liked the idea.
                              
                              One small note: a quoted statement that ends in a dialogue tag should actually use a comma, not a period. Example: "Maybe we should just call the cops," I said.
                              
                              Otherwise, nice work. Best wishes in the contest ^^
kurokochii2 kurokochii2 Aug 11, 2016
Don't they already know not to touch the wired girl...
                              Brilliant, by the way.