Poetry of Life

Poetry of Life

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Trisha By xxDreamyxx Updated Oct 20, 2011

All my poems on Life, the recent ones, will later be added in the story group :D

Kamandam Kamandam Oct 12, 2013
...its not bad at all....if you work on better vocabulary words that would make it soooo much better!!! Good job though
medjine medjine Feb 24, 2011
"tiny baby steps to the the unknown" i like dhat line and the poem is really guud 
xxDreamyxx xxDreamyxx Dec 30, 2010
@Isha1000 Well, its more general, I wrote 'tiny baby steps to the unknown' because it sounded right to me plus it gave more effect to it than 'tiny steps to the unknown' :D ........Thank you ^_^ 
Isha1000 Isha1000 Dec 26, 2010
hey loved the poem:-) it is really sweet. however I would like to know is this poem about love between a parent and child or between two lovers? I ask this because you speak about "tiny baby steps into the unknown". 
april00026000 april00026000 Dec 26, 2010
That was deep .... made me think of all the bad stuff that's been happening
angelicwriter angelicwriter Dec 25, 2010
really sweet. It feels so real when I picture it in my head. Lovely