All my poems on Life, the recent ones, will later be added in the story group :D
...its not bad at all....if you work on better vocabulary words that would make it soooo much better!!! Good job though
"tiny baby steps to the the unknown" i like dhat line and the poem is really guud
@Isha1000 Well, its more general, I wrote 'tiny baby steps to the unknown' because it sounded right to me plus it gave more effect to it than 'tiny steps to the unknown' :D ........Thank you ^_^
hey loved the poem:-) it is really sweet. however I would like to know is this poem about love between a parent and child or between two lovers? I ask this because you speak about "tiny baby steps into the unknown".
That was deep .... made me think of all the bad stuff that's been happening
really sweet. It feels so real when I picture it in my head. Lovely