Mafia Boss's Baby Boy

Mafia Boss's Baby Boy

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M&Ms By ponya10 Updated 7 days ago

Going to his main mistress's house after not hearing from her in almost a year only to find her dead on the floor with a crying baby in the other room, he only has one thing to say... "Oh MERDA"

Warning: First chapter IS CRAPPY. But I promise after the 2nd chapter it gets good.

Inspired by @CamryR5fan

I would research babies and what they can and cannot do at certain ages.  For example, a one month old wont be able to giggle just yet.  I like the story though! ;)
So far so good.  There are some 'slang' type wording in there, not sure if you did that on purpose or not ;).  For example: "Hopping out the car" should be 'Hopping out of the car' but again if that is what you meant to do , cool :)
Wow Amari, google translates really helping you?😂 jk but where u learn this spanish?
Five minutes? Y thts long time to walk down a flite of stairs 😱😂
I would research babies and what they can and cannot do at certain ages.  For example, a one month old wont be able to giggle just yet.  I like the story though! ;)
So far so good.  There are some 'slang' type wording in there, not sure if you did that on purpose or not ;).  For example: "Hopping out the car" should be 'Hopping out of the car' but again if that is what you meant to do , cool :)