Two Hours Away

Two Hours Away

4.4K Reads 54 Votes 21 Part Story
Maddie By systemfanmaddie Completed

Jenni who is just searching for a fresh start has only one reason not to go away from her public school life.  She has a scholarship to a very nice private school two hours away.  When she loses the one reason to stay, she accepts the scholarship.  She is now going away to a private school with absoluetly no idea what to expect.  When Jenni loses almost everything she loves, she feel like she will never be loved.  Once all of the suffering is over, will things ever fall into place? Or will they only stay as bad as they once were? I know it's not great and it still needs a lot of work, but let me know what you think.

systemfanmaddie systemfanmaddie Jul 29, 2012
@IqraDin1 thank you so much for the comment. I'm really glad that you liked it and I'm glad that you found it. Please let me know when you write something. Id very much love to read it
IqraDin1 IqraDin1 Jul 29, 2012
Hey Maddie. I'm new in wattpad. And my friend told me this, and I think your really good. And btw I could tell that your upset when you said "yeah, yeah. I'm fine". Really good story ... Keep writing! Bless you :) x
yellowrainzebra yellowrainzebra Jul 17, 2011
Hey Maddie! i miss u! u r the best writer i know! keep writing!
Armiella Armiella Apr 09, 2011
Btw this is really good! You actually sound like you have some intelligence and writing skill. :) I'll have to keep reading! It's going in my library. ;)
Kay-KAylalala Kay-KAylalala Jan 06, 2011
It's good maddie.
                              one thing to work on though, your sentences end so abruptly it's almost robotic. Like, "I walked to my room. I put on my hat."
                              tr something like..
                              "I walked into my room and shoved my hat on my head, sighing." 
                              you get me? But it's very good! :)
sicilleyy sicilleyy Jan 03, 2011
That was great! I hope you right more! Check out my story "Daddy" Hope you like it!