The Beautiful Brave One

The Beautiful Brave One

13 Part Story 5.4K Reads 128 Votes
Bethany Johnson By bethybomb95 Updated Jan 10, 2012

“Promise me that if anything happens you will stay here with Aoife.”
“Never.”
“It’s too dangerous Caoimhe.”
“I trust you.”

Eighteen-year-old Caoimhe Noelle’s town was slaughtered before her very eyes, including all her family. Kidnapped by the man who ordered this to happen she realises what he wants and she makes sure he doesn’t get it. When Peter Cavanagh rescues her she realises that the world she was so used to may not be the one she belongs to. Is she brave enough to get revenge for her family's death? Can she do it without losing her heart and becoming cursed?

bethybomb95 bethybomb95 Jun 22, 2012 08:09PM
@BethanyLacey Haha xD i promise to write happier things in the future :P and thanks! :D
bethybomb95 bethybomb95 Jun 22, 2012 08:08PM
@BethanyLacey Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you liked it! :D
BethanyLacey BethanyLacey Jun 22, 2012 07:32AM
Ok, now I'm crying. That poor girl! :( I feel so bad for her! Mostly the little boy though. He had nothing to die for! Your writing makes me think it's real and that I'm either watching whats happening or I'm the girl. Your such a good writer! But write something more happy sometime please.
BethanyLacey BethanyLacey Jun 22, 2012 07:21AM
I'm on the first page and it's making me teary eyed. :'( I love how you write. :)
AndieeeLoO AndieeeLoO Jan 03, 2012 10:09PM
WoW girl this is so gooood!! I just want to keep going its... BEAUTIFUL<3
bethybomb95 bethybomb95 Dec 18, 2011 07:39PM
Wow thank you soo much! I'm really enjoying writing this!! :D