Klance fanfic, cute fluff mostly i think
I WAS HOPING FOR KEITH TO LIKE GO TO BED WITH LANCE, BUT I GUESS ITS A BIT TO EARLY IN THE STORY FOR THAT
This would spoil pidge's gender for people who just got into the show.
Omg thank you sooo much! I'm really glad you think so, and keeping the character personalities canon is one of the things i think about the most when writing fanfiction, so it makes me really happy that it's working
Wow. Your paragraph lining could use some work, but your grammar and words chosen is amazing!
Seems to be at a good start. There were a few spelling errors, and I think one part where a space was missing. Other than that, it was really good. The people seemed in character. And that sure sounds like an excuse Keith would make up. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, so keep it up!
Keith.....Keith is me. I am Keith. I have done this before to a person and I have no shame....many bants to this day. ALSO KLANCE JGSDHGVASJ<DVASC