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The Prisoners

The Prisoners

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*- Rose -* By drifting-stars Updated 2 days ago

(Highest ranking #5 in Sci-Fi) 
In the shadows of the plague-stricken city of Faltan, stalks a sixteen-year-old girl. Alison is a musical prodigy by day and a highly trained thief by night; she is one of the best of her kind, and only the wealthiest of clients can afford her.    
Until one night, she wakes up in a dark, filthy cell in the middle of nowhere. 
    50 juvenile delinquents, considered expendable by society. 
    1 deadly plague.
    0 cures. 
The once brilliant thief diminished to nothing but a test subject, a mere lab-rat for those above her to poke and prod at for the rest of her life. But as people start to die all around her, a shocking revelation is made, and a dangerous plan is formed.  
 Yet, despite everything, can her thief's heart be stolen? Or shall it be her life stolen first?
Cover credits to @AAKhan :) he's incredibly talented so go check him out! You won't be disappointed 

*Desperately needs editing so please forgive the mistakes while I try and finish the first draft*

GreenLizzy GreenLizzy Jun 01
Woah, just started to read the first 2 paragraphs and I'm awed by the amount of imagery and rich language used. 
csimm99 csimm99 Jun 02
I like the idea that they were in the same place and were abducted together even though they don't know who each other are yet.
Lynnbeauty Lynnbeauty May 07
Read my story 'the dick monster' you'll be glad you did 🍆
skematt skematt 6 days ago
I like your prologue! Alison's character and identity are pretty interesting, and i'd love to read more on her.
This rewrite is incredible!! It gives so much more insight into Sebastian and Alison's relationship!!!
skematt skematt 6 days ago
Strong, powerful intro! I like your writing style and sentence syntaxes!