Cruel; Wicked. The Felon.

Cruel; Wicked. The Felon.

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ScarletHeartfelia By ScarletHeartfelia Updated 2 days ago

[Highest Ranking: 27 in Teen Fiction]

Felon
/fè-lun/
Cruel; Wicked. 


I continued biting my lips whilst fidgeting with my finger nails, my mind still pondering over the question he asked minutes ago. 


"Ojalá éstos fueran mis dientes mordiéndote los labios." I heard him mumble under his breath. 
[I wish those were my fucking teeth biting your lips.]



I threw a morose look in his direction. "Speak an apprehensable language." I snarled getting annoyed. 



"You need to get inside my mind to understand that." He responded nonchalantly shrugging off his shoulders. 



"I don't enter dirty places." I snapped rolling my eyes. 



"But I would really enjoy entering your dirty places."



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Cover made by @misscaulfield

bloodydrinks bloodydrinks Dec 02, 2016
same here but it's still nice to have the attention 😂😂 i'm confusing lol
sheennasharma sheennasharma Nov 13, 2016
Feedback: Don't use: *  in curse words. Either write the full spellings or don't use them.😘
methodicals methodicals Nov 13, 2016
okay, first of all, your cast and cover is totally amazing. attractive, and onimous. gives me a suspense type feel. your prologue totally drew me in from the get go, and now i'm ready to get my hands dirty!
rioruprl rioruprl Jan 07
It was so cool .....loved it dis trailer speaks itself 
                              Amazing ....
Maybe change "like a" to "into"?  So it would be "...will make Scar into numb ice."
After 'and' put, " maybe just maybe" so it will say "And maybe, just maybe, the numbness will make her fall for him like stiff ice."