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Consume My Soul (On Hold)

Consume My Soul (On Hold)

7.7K Reads 231 Votes 8 Part Story
Sydney Blake By Sunshinebby Updated Jun 18, 2011

In a war between Heaven and Hell, an angel is stripped of his wings and cast out of Heaven with his guardian. As a fallen angel he must live out his two year sentence on Earth in total torment. Every day brings even more agony. Then he meets a girl who takes the pain away if only for mere seconds. He is drawn to her, using her for relief but when he sees she's clearly on her way to being rewarded in Heaven will he surrender to his unbearable punishment or risk damming her to be a fallen like himself? But in the end, it won't be his decision. RECENTLY ENTERED IN THE WATTY AWARDS!!!

concentricxx concentricxx Jul 01, 2011
Wow this is really good I'm so glad I read it! Such a great concept, and your descriptions are absolutely amaazing. Loved it.
Sunshinebby Sunshinebby Jun 03, 2011
@_MyOnlyRemedy_ Thank you! And it's part of his punishment (:
_MyOnlyRemedy_ _MyOnlyRemedy_ Jun 03, 2011
I really like this one, my only questions is why does he feel that much pain in the beginning?
NoMoneyNoHoney NoMoneyNoHoney May 23, 2011
from start to finish Liliana's character has been confident and she seems to be a good leader.
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GinjaNinja1D GinjaNinja1D May 21, 2011
@Sunshinebby No probs, it is fab, just to warn you though I'm not very good at constructive comments, if I love it thats what I will say ;)
Sunshinebby Sunshinebby May 20, 2011
@Sheripie Lol, thanks! 
                              @JulesCarlyle Thanks! (: Good luck! lol.