'Til Death Do Us Part...

'Til Death Do Us Part...

67.8K Reads 745 Votes 46 Part Story
ReeseyBoo By ReeseyBoo Updated Nov 23, 2012

Under Construction. 

A teenage love story never seemed this real.

  • alphonso
  • alphy
  • antonio
  • becoming
  • big
  • blood
  • brother
  • call
  • candy
  • car
  • clues
  • codes
  • cream
  • cupcakes
  • danger
  • deal
  • death
  • deeds
  • diner
  • driving
  • evan
  • falling
  • family
  • father
  • fight
  • food
  • funny
  • grammy
  • guards
  • guns
  • hickey
  • history
  • homeroom
  • ice
  • innocence
  • innuendos
  • isa
  • isabella
  • jace
  • jaylen
  • kidnapp
  • love
  • lía
  • mafia
  • marcello
  • mia
  • morning
  • mortaccio
  • mother
  • murder
  • mystery
  • newbies
  • nonno
  • papoley
  • park
  • part
  • past
  • pauly
  • period
  • phone
  • post
  • pov
  • promise
  • pudding
  • questions
  • revealed
  • routine
  • sammy
  • sasha
  • secret
  • secrets
  • sickness
  • sleep
  • stalking
  • story
  • strange
  • stranger
  • taunting
  • test
  • tiffany
  • till
  • truth
  • vaction
  • vincent
  • woman
  • worry
ReeseyBoo ReeseyBoo Feb 12, 2011
@equinelover909 thanks for commenting AND voting :) i'm working on fixing their language for four year olds and the grammar errors also.
ReeseyBoo ReeseyBoo Feb 12, 2011
@trishthewriter thanks for commenting and i'll try to fix the dialogue. when i was writing this i forgot to start new lines when someone was speaking, but i'm glad you understood what i was trying to say :)
ReeseyBoo ReeseyBoo Feb 12, 2011
@Unlucky13 thanks for commenting and i'll remember the tip about the adjectives when i go to edit it.
ReeseyBoo ReeseyBoo Feb 12, 2011
@tianajade thanks for commenting and i haven't had a chance to change the dialogue  yet because others have noticed they don't speak like four year olds too. 
ReeseyBoo ReeseyBoo Feb 12, 2011
@tianajade @Unlucky13 @trishthewriter @equinelover909  thanks for commenting and the advice is much appreciated! i have a question though because all for of you said the same thing (i think) ... how is to the story moving to fast? like the first 6 parts or this one part in general?
trishthewriter trishthewriter Feb 12, 2011
You've got talent, but you're story's a bit hard to follow with the mash up of dialogue. You might want to be careful of that. And tianajade is right about the dialogue, but I see what you're going for.