My Immortal with Commentary

My Immortal with Commentary

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Violet Kingston By VioletKingston Updated Nov 29, 2016

My thoughts when I was reading the infamous bad fanfic "My Immortal" by Tara Gilesbie.

  • badfanfiction
  • commentary
  • death
  • enoby
  • goffik
  • gothic
  • gryffindor
  • harry
  • harrypotter
  • hermionegranger
  • hogwarts
  • hufflepuff
  • humor
  • myimmortal
  • ravenclaw
  • ronweasly
  • slytherin
  • timetravel
Gigi0412 Gigi0412 Oct 09
Yes,but as you can see, all levels of common sense has gone out the window in this "book"
I always hated the amount of time she describes her outfit but then I drew her for a friend and I was suddenly grateful
ApollosHalo ApollosHalo Jul 09
you will never be the man my bby draco is today hunny but keep dreaming it's cute
Note that later on she starts ranting about how she hates pink yet she wakes up every morning surrounded by it
Plot twist: Draco's father is the one who hired the muggle band
I didn't notice the incest before you commented on it oh well