Don't Hold Back

Don't Hold Back

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Leah By Miniloverleah Updated Apr 21, 2012

Little J'dour was a champion 2 yr old Filly and set for stardom but when Little J'dour breaks down in the Breeders Cup Juvenile Filles,
Her owners send her to the slaughter house, scared and broken down, Little J'dour excapes her handlers
and Runs furiously till she comes across a girl in a field.
Tessica Ann Miller is a 16 yr old lonely girl looking for companionship. When Tess and Little J'dour (newly renamed Bellatrix) bond and become closer together and they start their journey to become Champion race horse and Champion Female Jockey.
Join them on their inspirational journey to stardom and happiness <3

hxllylou5sos hxllylou5sos Oct 11, 2013
Can you please put speech marks so we actually know when someone is talking! It's lazy to not put them...
CaitlinMcHugh CaitlinMcHugh Dec 29, 2010
Great job but u shud space put the conversation between people it make it a little easier to read but really good.