Wave of Hearts (On Hold) (don't read)(....ever)

Wave of Hearts (On Hold) (don't read)(....ever)

1.1K Reads 28 Votes 5 Part Story
CelestialStarlet By CelestialStarlet Updated Mar 06, 2011

The sea. Calming, peaceful. But this serene body of blue holds secrets. Secrets that can test relationships. Malibu born senior Auriela Ridgeway has had her expirience with heartbreaks but now, she's thousands of miles away in foreign beachside city. When she meats a boy with curiously colored eyes, she must realize that the world is not always what it seems. And sometimes, the laws of nature are bent.

ZaynahSaysNo ZaynahSaysNo Mar 17, 2011
@HexPixie well the person was like its really interesting but you do have small grammar mistakes... btw, if you ever need help you can email me or wateva just reply if u want my proper email... :)
CelestialStarlet CelestialStarlet Mar 17, 2011
@zeenah95
                              thankyou! Which comment? I really want to improve this
ZaynahSaysNo ZaynahSaysNo Mar 17, 2011
it was really good but i do agree with the comment below min... :)
CelestialStarlet CelestialStarlet Jan 24, 2011
@finnie
                              thankyou for reading it :)
                              and what do you mean by teetering on the edge?
                              And what do you think of the length. Do you believe it's too short?
                              
                              Thankyou for your opinions by the way :)
CelestialStarlet CelestialStarlet Jan 09, 2011
@Zarinn Thankyou so much! first comment i get on this, makes me happy. And any specific type of punctuality? I enjoy the constructive critisism though because I really want to improve so thanks! :)
thelazydreamer thelazydreamer Jan 09, 2011
"heart attack waiting to happen" LOL. I really liked this chapter! Just be careful of some tiiiny punctual mistakes there.. but I'm just being picky :P looks like this is going to have a pretty interesting storyline!