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The Way Home

The Way Home

128K Reads 5.5K Votes 22 Part Story
J.D Edwards By bamababe26 Updated Jan 03

Tamara Nolf had a hard life Growing up pore. When she lost her mother. Her world came down around her. 

She never thought she could be loved. She don't know how to trust.
Would the two hot cowboys get her to fall in love or will she run.

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I know everyone is pretty much bashing on you for spelling, but I want you to know you're very talented and this story has so much potential
JoanTaylor6 JoanTaylor6 Nov 21, 2016
Your written English could be better, use your dictionary for words that your not sure of instead of putting things down that seem right.
nikkilafleur09 nikkilafleur09 Sep 26, 2016
Nice plot so far. Has a few errors but nothing horrible. I look forward to reading more. 😊 Thank you for taking the time to write this story.
tminnis67 tminnis67 Sep 20, 2016
Damn he's fine. Love the eyes. But what in the world is he in.
Fujoshiswag Fujoshiswag Oct 24, 2016
......the spelling mistakes are that of my cousin in first come on close instead of clothes, seeance instead of sense, were instead of where and more like bruh did you even try tf
PS2013 PS2013 Nov 28, 2016
This could be a really moving and impactful first chapter if just a little more were added. But this is a very good start