The Beginning of a New Tradition

The Beginning of a New Tradition

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earth_hugger By earth_hugger Updated Aug 18, 2011

After a young girl's family is murder the night of her 13th birthday she remains silent for three full years till right before her 17th birthday, a new kid come to town full of mystery and wealth. And a big secret, he knows who killed her family, but he isnt willing to tell it just yet he is waiting for the right moment. Waiting for someone the well be the beginning of a new tradition for many in the small town of Salem.

earth_hugger earth_hugger Jan 05, 2011
@readers. i have edited and have been editing my story thanks to the help i have gotten so please reread if you like 
chairsniffa chairsniffa Jan 03, 2011
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chairsniffa chairsniffa Jan 03, 2011
This seems like a diary entry. I wonder what will come next whether you will begin it with the murder scene from third person Point of View and in present tense. I have a great guide in my works called ChairSniffa Critiques and I think it could really help you in your writings! Check it out!!!
earth_hugger earth_hugger Oct 25, 2010
@frakkevin thank you and ill be sure to check out your story 
KAFrak KAFrak Oct 22, 2010
The writing is good, but I'm sure it'll attract some of the young female readers
                              
                              
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