Men. Friend or Foe?

Men. Friend or Foe?

582 Reads 19 Votes 3 Part Story
Alison By angel_princess Updated Jan 01, 2011

Amanda Crowlee's life changed after a traumatizing incident with three men. Even a year after she's still afraid of a man's touch. But what about Seth Greenly? Is she afraid this hot new neighbor of hers? Or is she warming up to the idea of him touching her?

angel_princess angel_princess Jan 13, 2011
@JESSaBELLIE i totally understand what your saying. since i put it up i've been thinking about that. cuz as soon as i wrote it i posted it up. i didn't read it over or anything.... but thanks for the advice
                              
                              @SparksFlyUp  thanks for reading :) glas you liked it :D
SparksFlyUp SparksFlyUp Jan 08, 2011
Just like I promised, i have read and voted you're lovely story.
                              
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                              You are very talented and the first chapter was great , aside from very few typo's it was great. Keep writing :) Please read comment and vote my story too. Thank you.
                              
                              much love, 
                              Elle
angel_princess angel_princess Dec 31, 2010
@Lunadreamrealm i was thinking that after i wrote the scene but i didn't actually know how to write it down... i might add to it later...
UnnaturalTears UnnaturalTears Dec 31, 2010
Wow, that is good. You really had an interesting beginning as well. :) 
chairsniffa chairsniffa Dec 30, 2010
PS if this ever happens to anyone reading this studies show that only one word will bring help to the victim. Yelling Fire Fire Fire! Then people come to the rescue!
chairsniffa chairsniffa Dec 30, 2010
Marked improvements I meant sorry!! Also men get raped by men too so if she met a guy like that maybe she'd realise that men can feel exactly the same as her!