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You Killed My Brother

You Killed My Brother

808 Reads 12 Votes 5 Part Story
Keith Rommel By KeithTRommel Updated Jan 07, 2011

Brad is a successful doctor and father of two that’s a celebrity in his community for his exceptional care and charity work.  Trigger is a local street thug that can’t keep his nose clean. When fate brings the two together in a horrible car accident, the doctor is left a paraplegic in a vegetative state and Trigger escapes without injury.

Glenn is a seasoned cop and Brad’s younger brother.  Trusting the justice system, he holds his desire for revenge against Trigger as he is brought to trial and watches helplessly as his brother’s wife and children suffer emotionally.  When Trigger escapes a long-term prison sentence on a legal technicality, Glenn, controlled by anger, sets out to avenge his families suffering by killing Trigger.  But what he forgets in his rage is that for every action, there is a reaction.

Emiloo Emiloo Jan 06, 2011
Oooo, successive p.o.v., so that we have all angles to the situation. Niiice! I did not get from the start that Sandy was a badass chick - but that may be because I am not a native English speaker. Other than that relatively small thing, perfect.
ControlledChaos ControlledChaos Dec 29, 2010
Shit!. o.o Fatty better watch his back! xD
                              Yet another amazing story bud, :]
                              Love it! It has a very creative plot so far, I can't wait to read more, and learn more about their backgrounds, :] 
                              peace love harmony, kayda