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For Bad Or For Worse [Book 1]

For Bad Or For Worse [Book 1]

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ᴘᴀɴᴅᴀ By peachypinklips Updated Mar 13

[Snippet]

The sicking thought was in her head as she felt her eyes brim with shameful yet sad tears.

Warm fingers were placed beneath her chin and lifted her head upwards. He stared into her eyes and clenched his teeth, the sight of her looking so vulnerable was like a hint showing that what he had done seemed deranged and low for people of his standards but then again, he got rid of the thought and stared at her teary eyes.

"I'd say men aren't as dangerous as they seem to be" He brought his lips towards her ear and whispered the last words "but, I'd be lying...you don't know what you've gotten yourself into mi amor."

Letting go of her chin, he turned away from her and exited the empty hallway.

She stared wistfully at his retreating figure and the tears she held in fell out like rain on a stormy day, sobs of sadness filled the hallway which was once devoid of a single sound to be heard. The confusion she had felt was nothing compared to the unknown feeling buried in her heart.


Copyright of CandyCane-Cutie

Cover by Listy3

Me: *Looks at my sweats and my hoodie * Clothes..more..like comfy clothes.
Olivia453 Olivia453 Oct 20, 2016
I advice you not to put so many similar description like how look woman and that main heroine all time do when wake up. I think you can delete it or change in another way 😉
inspiredrlh inspiredrlh Dec 16, 2016
This is a great start! Maybe in your sentences you could make them more detailed, so they sound less robotic and not so much like a procedure. That would definitely make your writing stand out more.
Blue_Book_Writer Blue_Book_Writer Dec 22, 2016
Oooooooooooooooo, he likes her!! She got a second interview, meaning a second chance to see her again!
Rojesta Rojesta Sep 15, 2016
I cannot understand how she got so late,  and then left her papers.
Daina-ann Daina-ann Mar 08
I wouldn't. Who is their right minds would judge a story by just the first chapter