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The Art Of Hearts

The Art Of Hearts

7.7K Reads 558 Votes 27 Part Story
ᴅ ᴀ ғ ғ ʏ By everscence Updated May 28

[Snippet]

I was immediately snapped out of my trance when I felt a pair of strong arms wrap around my waist. I let out a strangled scream as I was pushed to the ground roughly. The air in my body was knocked out as I made a hard collision with the ground. I whimpered in pain and tried scooting backwards but only then did I realise the two large men behind. The man in front let out a tut as he stared down at my weakened figure.

"Quite the runner. A beautiful one at that, no wonder all the capos can't get their eyes of you."

Huh?

What is he talking about?

"We should have fun before we take her to the boss, don't you think so?"

He looked over at the guys behind him and I shook my head vigorously, my blood ran cold and before I could stop myself, a sob escaped my lips.

"Aww...a baby she is, so cute when she cries."

"P..please don't."

"Oh we will. So shut your fucking mouth before I make you!"

Of course I didn't protest, I kept silent and let the tears flow. I wouldn't have moved here, I would have stayed in my old home, it was better compared to being here.

My thoughts were cut shut as I was pulled towards an alley. I kept making small pleads, but that earned me a slap on my face. It hurt so much.

I was thrown on the ground like garbage, and two of the men got behind me holding me down while the other one got down on his knees in front of me. I tried to get out their strong grip but it was no use, I tried to scream for help but a cloth was shoved into my mouth, the smell of it made me almost gag and I had no idea what happened next because it felt like all the energy I had was drained away from me.

"Much better."


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Me: *Looks at my sweats and my hoodie * Clothes..more..like comfy clothes.
Olivia453 Olivia453 Oct 20, 2016
I advice you not to put so many similar description like how look woman and that main heroine all time do when wake up. I think you can delete it or change in another way 😉
inspiredrlh inspiredrlh Dec 16, 2016
This is a great start! Maybe in your sentences you could make them more detailed, so they sound less robotic and not so much like a procedure. That would definitely make your writing stand out more.
Blue_Book_Writer Blue_Book_Writer Dec 22, 2016
Oooooooooooooooo, he likes her!! She got a second interview, meaning a second chance to see her again!
Rojesta Rojesta Sep 15, 2016
I cannot understand how she got so late,  and then left her papers.
Daina-ann Daina-ann Mar 08
I wouldn't. Who is their right minds would judge a story by just the first chapter