For Bad Or For Worse [UNDER MAJOR EDITING]

For Bad Or For Worse [UNDER MAJOR EDITING]

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♡izzy♡ By floralise Updated 3 days ago

I heard a familiar deep chuckle that sent tingles up my spine and I turned pale and my cheeks may or may not have turned red, just on cue it began to rain.

"You just sold your boss out. You sold me out Mackenzie."

He turned me around and whispered in my ear.

"Why do you enjoy trouble?"
He asked.

"What are you talking about?"

I tried to not stutter as his scent flooded my nostrils, I totally forgot about the rain and the fact that  we're getting soaked.

"Why walk in the dark night? When you could simply ask for a ride? Why do you like danger? There's already a lot of it bundled up for you if you don't know."

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He was emotionless.
She was quite but had a nice personality.
She needed a job,
And he needed a new employee.

She was Mackenzie Williams,
He was Alexander Braxton.

What happens when she finds the right job in his company but with the wrong yet right person?

Known as a billionaire and CEO of Braxton's Enterprises, Alexander finds himself hiring Mackenzie Williams as his assistant with the words "She'll be gone in a week, why not give her a chance."

But did that happen? And is Alexander who he says he is? Or is he a much more powerful person? What will happen when Mackenzie realises that Alexander Knows more about her than she knows about herself?

Join Mackenzie Williams and Alexander Braxton as they go through an insane yet revealing journey with past events said and forgotten histories told.


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Olivia453 Olivia453 Oct 20, 2016
I advice you not to put so many similar description like how look woman and that main heroine all time do when wake up. I think you can delete it or change in another way 😉
inspiredrlh inspiredrlh Dec 16, 2016
This is a great start! Maybe in your sentences you could make them more detailed, so they sound less robotic and not so much like a procedure. That would definitely make your writing stand out more.
Blue_Book_Writer Blue_Book_Writer Dec 22, 2016
Oooooooooooooooo, he likes her!! She got a second interview, meaning a second chance to see her again!
Rojesta Rojesta Sep 15, 2016
I cannot understand how she got so late,  and then left her papers.
Olivia453 Olivia453 Oct 20, 2016
Oh she had to take them. Big company doesn't forget such dispersion