Life For Rent!

Life For Rent!

3.8K Reads 92 Votes 6 Part Story
Janena By precybee Updated Jan 17, 2011

Alley Carthway, an ordinary bartender, never dreamed of becoming an impersonator until she is offerer $2 million dollars to pose as the missing daughter of a mentally ill millionaire; Cordelia Simpson. As she struggles to convince everyone she's for real, she never expects to uncover the true mystery behind the disappearance...or fall in love.  

xXhopelessromanticXx xXhopelessromanticXx Jan 17, 2011
wow, really good! Though at the beginning you said that she gets minimum sleep but never has to worry about her weight though if you DO get minimum sleep you actually GAIN weight, just a tip
Crisann1976 Crisann1976 Jan 14, 2011
This is a fresh and very interesting idea.. I will continue reading it :)
Just_let_go Just_let_go Dec 24, 2010
This is quite a very good start for a story. There are barely any mistakes. I loved how you didn't put anything in extreme detail and how you spaced everything out! 
                              This story seems very promising in a good laugh
precybee precybee Dec 23, 2010
@aimimi thanks for reading this and voting. Much appreciated.:-) 
emanicl emanicl Dec 23, 2010
@precybee Oh no problem at all! Good job reworking the beginning. 
precybee precybee Dec 19, 2010
@emanicl lol thanks so much. I think i'll take the advice and change the beginning. I'm still thinking. Thanks for taking the time!