Descendant (divergent an fiction)

Descendant (divergent an fiction)

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A Dreamer🌾🌻 By justdarcy Completed

*Warning for spoilers of any of the books*

After the war, Tris is still dead but what if she had a daughter first? And left Tobias as a single father? Well this is about Harper Nicole Eaton. I also am bringing Uriah back and if someone is supposed to be dead- and is in my book- I just brought them back but itll be mostly about their kids. Will, Al, and Marlene are dead. 

After Tris's death, Tobias takes Harper back to Chicago but the rules have been far stretched. They kept the factions for those who still believed but now the gate has been permanently open. 

Tobias is the usual protective dad because Harper is all he has and all he has to love anymore. And Harper looking exactly like Tris, and acting exactly like her seems like a piece of her is still with him.


Stranger_Addict Stranger_Addict 4 days ago
Feedback: I really like this chapter. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there but overall very clean writing. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter
Themysticalbook Themysticalbook Aug 02, 2016
I was smiling uncontrollably while reading this chapter. HARPER MET AMARYLLIS.
Stranger_Addict Stranger_Addict 4 days ago
Feedback: seriously still love this so far, the pacing and phrasing is very good. Again. Small grammar mistakes and maybe u could improve on... uh. Lol I can't think of anything it's so good😂