Lapidot Fan Fiction: Girl Next Door

Lapidot Fan Fiction: Girl Next Door

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bookwormlovesyou125 By bookwormlovesyou125 Updated Oct 31

Poor Peridot seem bummed out about moving yet again to beach city. But little does the young teenager know that she will meet a girl next door who will change her life. Maybe her life in beach city won't be bad after all.

😂😂😂😋😋If I had that dream I probably would have ate my mom.(that sounded way better I'm my head.😅)
The POV shifts are too frequent. Space them out. It allows more character development.