Messed Up Cinderella Story

Messed Up Cinderella Story

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Tempo By catsRULEdogsDROOL Completed

How would you feel if everyone you loved, left you? 

Meet Hannah Beack, a sad, lonely, abused girl at her high school. Since her parents died, she has been living with her abusive step father, Mike. The abuse gets worse when Mike's son, and Hannah's step brother, decides to move in. Everything starts to crumble around her and Hannah doesn't know if she can go on anymore. 

What will happen when Ian Markison shows up and keeps her from crumbling? Is he her knight in shinning armor she so long has dream of? Or is he just going to hurt her and leave her like everyone in her life? Should she stand strong and give this boy a chance? Or let herself crumble? Most importantly, who is Ian? And will he let her fall?

GautamKundu GautamKundu Jul 14
hugging Prince? I just thought.. well, she's a baby,right? so that's impossible!😉
I hate you and your name. Dogs rule anyway. Agree with the one below me.
werewolf72 werewolf72 Jan 30, 2014
Wait she was 7
                              Then 10 years past
                              Shouldn't she be 17 
                              So that would mean 1more year?
MysteryGirl72 MysteryGirl72 Dec 01, 2013
Wow, I only read the first chapter so far but you are amazing. You actually made me feel the emotional pain of Hannah. Not many people can do that. You really have a gift and I can't wait to read more of the story XD
supernaturalmom supernaturalmom Aug 05, 2013
Awe that was sad.I wanted to cry. And wow her mom died on her birthday. 
                              Peace Out
Dolphinrider Dolphinrider Apr 01, 2013
So depressing, yet adorable. Well worded and extremely good so far!