FOREVER

FOREVER

2.1K Reads 598 Votes 33 Part Story
Tannya Rampal By TannyaRampal Updated a day ago

"Aren't you going to bid your father goodbye?" I asked. I never knew why they acted this way with him. For the life of me, i simply couldn't understand the reason for this rude behaviour from the 3 of them. They turned around and said goodbye to Zach without really bothering to look at him directly and left. I shook my head dejectedly at their behaviour. 

"I'm sorry hun. I can't seem to understand what is wrong with them." I apologized looking into his beautiful grey eyes. I will never get enough of him that's for sure. He smiled and shook his head. "It's okay love.Don't argue with them over me please. I know they love me." 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Meet Zinnia. She is beautiful, out going and sarcastic. Meet Zachary. He is good looking, arrogant and most importantly a typical bad boy. The thing they have in common is the need to protect their loved ones at all costs. 
Join their journey that might change everything they have ever believed in... It will most definitely not be a mundane year that Zinnia was hoping for. Drama will unfold, relationships will be formed and a lot more will change by the end of this journey. 
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

P.S: This story will mostly be flashbacks. So, there will be a mixture of the past and the present.

I also enjoyed the lightheartedness of the scene. Not many books start this way anymore with a family moment. It was refreshing to revisit a scene like this :)
I also enjoyed the lightheartedness of the scene. Not many books start this way anymore with a family moment. It was refreshing to revisit a scene like this :)
Avianna is a awesome name
                              Where do you get such amazing names from? 
                              Huh? 
                              Huh?
                              Kay ignore me
A suggestion :-
                              Don't explain everything at the start. Let the characters be introduced as the story flows
Sierra3618 Sierra3618 Oct 21
oh, I see what you doing! She's much older, but she's having a flashback about when she met her husband like in many movies I've since. This is really good. Surprised that someone actually did it
The fact that she's a grandma shocked me for a sec as it's not too common