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Biography of a Terrible Man

Biography of a Terrible Man

2.9K Reads 431 Votes 35 Part Story
Alexis Beard By AlexisBeard Updated 3 days ago

The God of Death gave the wrong name. For this hunt, a disgraced deserter must be summoned. 
  An oath never to kill again, and he was on the verge of breaking it. Despite all his promises. 
  Kildar, known by the other hunters as Greyskin, was the only one to actually be raised by them, up there in the seclusion of Death's Temple. The world below, with its love of life and reluctance to kill, was completely alien to him. 
  Until one day it wasn't. Life, in the end, worked its charms on him as well, and he began to doubt, even to fear, everything the priests of Death had ever taught him. 
  Disenchanted with their teachings, Kildar seeks redemption in a strange way, one that only works within his confused mind: by setting out on one last hunt.
  Cover by @MelanieBd
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adamowenpriestley adamowenpriestley Sep 20, 2016
What a fantastic beginning, an emotional roller coaster, I think you've already got me hooked.
blare_lina blare_lina Dec 17, 2016
I really liked it. I can't say anything about grammar and all coz I suck in that department. :)  I liked how you portrait the death and life according in a relatable way. :)  Keep writing.
SarabrinaElfbourne SarabrinaElfbourne Nov 14, 2016
                              This looks interesting! I had some reservations when I realized how dark it sounded from the synopsis, but upon reading this I think I'm going to enjoy it.
                              I love how the feelings and observations of the man were presented. I was really transported there.
                              Great job!
MelanieBd MelanieBd Sep 26, 2016
BTW thank you for using my cover! Hope it works with the feeling of the story!
Day_Dreamer18 Day_Dreamer18 Sep 26, 2016
                              Wow, that was something. I'm not sure what to think about it actually. Haha. Don't get me wrong, I really like it. Your  description and detail to character is really good. I've never read somethin like this before. Very well done. :)
DJAtomika DJAtomika Nov 18, 2016
                              Alright, I like this chapter. It's mysterious in the right ways and it's paced well. Short enough to draw attention to the story, and not too long. The way the characters are presented are great as well! Overall a good read, not too many things to nitpick on. Good job!