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Thirster 2467

Thirster 2467

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//g.a.// By GiaAlexiou Updated Apr 12

Everyone believes that the government are hiding aliens in Area 51 in Nevada. 

How about if there's exactly the same underground building in New York? But they don't have 'aliens' they have something deadlier that runs in the night. 


Twenty-six year old Marilyn Hurly has been alone all her life. When she was a toddler her whole family was massacred by vampires in the night. The day of her families funeral, she is taken away by the government, showing her the world of bloodthirsty monsters. 

Now she's older and able to work around in the underground with scientists. They see the living of vampires they have caught, torturing them, using them and trying to get a better look at them. 

Marilyn is assigned to a vampire, Thirster 2467. No name, no identity, no nothing. Now she will have to see if she can break him open.


DreamingNikol DreamingNikol Jul 30, 2016
Throat torn (in) less that ten seconds. Sorry if I'm annoying you.
OneAwkwardPerson OneAwkwardPerson Jul 31, 2016
Whoop whoop blood fo dayzz 😂😂 I mean oh nooooooo soooo sad
frasermagoo frasermagoo Jul 31, 2016
what an exciting prologue never wanted it to end was so into it thanks for sharing
Tannahill2002 Tannahill2002 Jul 31, 2016
You do what you love!!! And I have read all of your vampire books because I am obsessed with reading them!!!
DreamingNikol DreamingNikol Jul 30, 2016
Mentally in her head is a redundance. I would remove either 'mentally' or 'in her head'. The scene description is wonderful so far. :)