All the secrets she never knew.

All the secrets she never knew.

528 Reads 14 Votes 8 Part Story
Sam By lolmonsterz Updated May 20, 2011

when michelle's best friend Chealsie goes on vacation to hawaii there she meets a new boyfriend that she will love to the end. But when chealsie brings him back to meet michelle they both fall in love and keep their love a secret... But their love cant be a secret forever.<3

my30secondromance my30secondromance Apr 26, 2011
@lolmonsterz do you want me to edit it, I already do it for a few writers?
lolmonsterz lolmonsterz Apr 26, 2011
@my30secondromance
                              
                              Sorry, I'm not really good with using punctuation.:-)
my30secondromance my30secondromance Apr 20, 2011
You asked me to read this story. Sorry but I have a real issue about direct speech: quote marks around what the dialogue; punctuation needs to be used correctly.
lolmonsterz lolmonsterz Mar 15, 2011
@ToldYouSo_14 thank you!!!! It means alot!!! Please tell your friends about my stories cuz I only have like 9 reads hehe LOL! :P.  I will update soon!!
lolmonsterz lolmonsterz Jan 19, 2011
@Phoebe16 thanks for the comment! I will check out my spelling and capillazation:-) And i will check out your stories!!!  Thanks :-)