Marauder Love

Marauder Love

4 Part Story 5.3K Reads 195 Votes
RhiannonKelly By RhiannonKelly Updated Jan 02, 2012

Her mum hates her and she gets bullied.
    All she has is the marauders to watch her back.
    
    But when two bestfriends fall in love, will it work out?
    
    But James has always loved Lily? hasnt he?
    But when he meets Rhi.. He cant even take his eyes of her.

tuzie94 tuzie94 Jan 01, 2012 01:37AM
I'm not one for fan fiction but i do like HP. I loved how the story went but either ways, your chapter was good, lots of dialogue. A few Grammatical errors but other wise nice. Voted :)
Trulie Trulie Dec 31, 2011 11:04PM
Not really a HP fan but I liked it despite the fact. The characters and emotions were described well.
Wow. I really like all your details and descriptions.
                                    Even though I don't really like fan fiction....I happen to really like this one! :)
RhiannonKelly RhiannonKelly Dec 31, 2011 10:42PM
@mycherryamour Thank you! :D and yes she is a witch, but they just havnt started hogwarts yet :) when she does, she'll be with the marauders :D thanks for reading :)
MoonShoes_DC MoonShoes_DC Dec 27, 2011 12:07AM
Loved it! I love Marauders and Harry Potter fan fics, I have one of my own ;-) But i always prefer fan fics that don't have Harry, Ron and Hermione as the characters because I always feel that the writer doesn't portray them correctly. This is great, well done!
fobfreak1 fobfreak1 Dec 26, 2011 11:54PM
@RhiannonKellie ah..well i feel stupid now...didnt put two and two together :) im trying to get through the next chapter, but im a slow reader on the computer