Her mum hates her and she gets bullied.
All she has is the marauders to watch her back.
But when two bestfriends fall in love, will it work out?
But James has always loved Lily? hasnt he?
But when he meets Rhi.. He cant even take his eyes of her.
I'm not one for fan fiction but i do like HP. I loved how the story went but either ways, your chapter was good, lots of dialogue. A few Grammatical errors but other wise nice. Voted :)
Not really a HP fan but I liked it despite the fact. The characters and emotions were described well.
Wow. I really like all your details and descriptions.
Even though I don't really like fan fiction....I happen to really like this one! :)
@mycherryamour Thank you! :D and yes she is a witch, but they just havnt started hogwarts yet :) when she does, she'll be with the marauders :D thanks for reading :)
Loved it! I love Marauders and Harry Potter fan fics, I have one of my own ;-) But i always prefer fan fics that don't have Harry, Ron and Hermione as the characters because I always feel that the writer doesn't portray them correctly. This is great, well done!
@RhiannonKellie ah..well i feel stupid now...didnt put two and two together :) im trying to get through the next chapter, but im a slow reader on the computer