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YoungForever_95 By YoungForever_95 Updated Mar 09, 2011

Elena is not a normal teenager. She's a Nephellim. She has  half angel blood in her self, and kills demons as a hobby. She's never seen another of her kind before except for her family. One day when she's walking back from a party, she gets attacked by a demon, and meets this realy hot boy, who she instantly falls in love with. They start to spend time together, but then weird things start to happen. Some situations almost leave her dead.

*Currently on hold*

YoungForever_95 YoungForever_95 Jun 07, 2011
@ThunderStorm67, and @LadyFoxglove thanks so much for commenting:)
LadyFoxglove LadyFoxglove Apr 17, 2011
I like this! I especially liked how she told him even though what is or have done is just walked away with out telling her. She's a tough one. I can't wait to see what happens next!
ThunderStorm67 ThunderStorm67 Mar 20, 2011
Love it I think imma say that to the guy I use to like lol put it on story form so his boy brain will understand what he did lmao anyways great story! 
ADMailloux ADMailloux Mar 04, 2011
Pretty good. Poor girl....that really sucks!!!! LOL. I voted for it. I likes it. :D
YoungForever_95 YoungForever_95 Feb 13, 2011
Thanks guys! :)
                              I appreciated the comments and the criticism
                              I will try to work on the spelling mistakes, i guess i missed them
trishthewriter trishthewriter Feb 10, 2011
I like this premise. I'm not sure you need to give the detailed description of your characters with their height and what not. You also need to make sure each new instance of diaglogue gets its own paragaph so your readers don't get confused. Good story though so I voted.