Young Love

Young Love

40.1K Reads 714 Votes 16 Part Story
Nadin By Spongetourbob Completed

Its always wrong when it seems too easy, therefore you do not seek freedom or question much frightened by the slight possibility that he may slit your throat or suffocate you to the graves
Paranoid by your own words, fearing them turn into something that you would never imply. 
In your heart your frightened and in your mind your scared, in your walk your limping but your strength is nowhere
To this day your tears may shed
And enough is enough, your grief will be fed.

teenagesus teenagesus Dec 18, 2012
This is the greatest book I've ever read on WattPad. It was absolutely amazing.
savannahhhmoore savannahhhmoore Feb 23, 2012
This is great! But as citykitty said, spelling, capitalization, and grammer, is an issue. I love the layout thought! Great job.
Gray98 Gray98 Jul 16, 2011
it's interesting.. after reading, you will feel like reading more... I just started writing a story, hope you will check it out.. 
audreelovexoxo audreelovexoxo Apr 25, 2011
Ohmygosh....I've never ever cried that much in a story....wow. That was an amazing story tho. 
rkhosp rkhosp Jan 29, 2011
You have great diction and make the wording flow! Good job! Never give up on writing... Keep it up!(: 
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Candyapplea556 Candyapplea556 Jan 18, 2011
I really super like it so far I suggested your story in mine just so you would know, I hope that's okay?