Phenomenal Illusion

Phenomenal Illusion

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ElizaLee By ElizaLee Completed

A poem I wrote about the environment when I was 12. Take it as you will.

TheOrangutan TheOrangutan Mar 13, 2011
@ElizaLee - no worries, made me smile which is always good =] 
TheOrangutan TheOrangutan Jan 07, 2011
Dropped in as requested. I quite like that, almost Dr Seusslike. Perhaps on the morphine line it could do with a couple less consonants as it halts the flow a little. Maybe "No, I don't do Morphine!!" Not that I'm any good at poetry =] 
                              It's rather cool...
whitneynicolelangley whitneynicolelangley Oct 11, 2010
This is really good! (:
                              It's unique and creative. 
                              I love poems and their hidden meanings and this is really good for being 12!(: