Every Night

Every Night

1 Part Story 2.1K Reads 89 Votes
Paul By foreverhidion3 Updated Dec 13, 2011

Every night, right before midnight, when another long day is done and the whole world is sleeping, I leave our house on the cliff and head down to the beach. As my bare feet hit the soft sand, still warm from a day in the heat, and my lungs take in the cool night air, it reminds me of the moment I first met you.

sloanranger sloanranger Mar 14, 2014 10:10AM
How lovely and poignant - hope it isn't true - but even if it were what a love you must have...              VT.
AlyssaT25 AlyssaT25 Mar 27, 2013 05:45AM
Ok, so I had no idea... that this would even be so... I mean you just... really know how to jerk a tear... or two.. ok a whole lot -.- Seriously though, I can't stop reading everything you've written xD
carobear carobear Nov 11, 2012 05:48AM
Whoops that "et" was a typo. Darn, uncontrollable touchscreen keyboard! :p OK that's all.
xirrya xirrya Nov 03, 2012 04:50PM
Once again, I`m spechless. Your work of art is just amazing. It takes you into another world. 
                                    
                                    Your talent is rare, and it`s obvious that everything you write comes from your heart. Keep it going.
SamRaumati SamRaumati Sep 03, 2012 10:52AM
Wow just oh my freakin god WOW dude that is like AMAZING every one of ur poems captivates me it's amazing the way you write is so unique! Do you write from experiences? Coz its amazing ur words flow on the page brilliantly! Man u have a freakin talent PLZ keep writing more!!!
janine818 janine818 Jul 24, 2012 06:14PM
No words to say how truly amazing i thought  that was, WOW is one thing but it doesnt do it justice, best thing i have ever read!!