If you loved me (On Hold/ Editing)

If you loved me (On Hold/ Editing)

32.1K Reads 474 Votes 11 Part Story
marisa 😙 By marisa_estele Updated Jun 29, 2011

Aqua considers herself an average girl. She is sick and tired of constantly moving from place to place and when she asks her mother for an explanation, all she gets is "All I want to do is protect you." Her mother is keeping something from her and she knows it. She was depressed about moving until she met the cute guy across the street, Jake. Jake's family is known for hunting werewolves and she finds that pretty odd. Their parents never got along with each other and every time she was at Jake's his dad would always have an icy attitude towards her. Eventually her mom reveals the secret and she tells Jake. Jake is put in the position where he has to choose between her and his dads ludicrous profession.

MarineLynn MarineLynn Jun 10, 2011
Great Story!
                              I kind of got confused about Andrew and stuff.
                              And Werewolves aren't my cup of tea to read.
                              But great, long chapter!
Pufflefan410 Pufflefan410 May 10, 2011
Wow. Very interesing. Lol, the dog? Hmm I wonder what that all means....Hmmm Great job!
Zeenah Zeenah May 04, 2011
Haha I love the inner monologue and how blunt she is... "I really gotta pee"! Very funny so far and interesting, I voted.
MoniqueTheRippah MoniqueTheRippah May 04, 2011
This is a really good start! I like it :D Voted! Aqua didn't like moving too much I gather...
ACRL37 ACRL37 May 04, 2011
this is a really good start!! A few minor grammatical mistakes but overall its pretty good =) *voted
Ortiz-Novels Ortiz-Novels Mar 20, 2011
Wow she sound really pissed to have moved away, I know what she feels because that's the way my family was for over two years, moving here and there and then having to adapt to the new place and school!(: ur story is great and deffinantly worth my vote!