Watch people cry over your body...
That must be the pain of ones that died, sorrow hits because their loved ones cannot hear them from that point on.
Not always typically true if spirits do choose to identify themselves, it's not always easy.
I loved this <3
I really liked it ! If you like to read poems try and read my last thoughts or what is life they are also really good poems like yours.
awwww sad:( shes dead...im now wonderin wats a happen wen i die :( this is really good :)
awww. . . . tear. im used to poems rhyming, so this is a nice change. ive had a dream where i was almost murdered, then i woke up screaming. eventually crying.