Breathing Fear

Breathing Fear

10 Part Story 6.8K Reads 209 Votes
Nikki By yourlilRIOT7 Completed

No one knows how it started… no one knows where they came from; all we know is that they are here and that if we don’t protect ourselves, we could turn into one of them…
    The world has been infected, with a disease. Avery is only fifteen years old and death is all around her. She, along with a few others, managed to survive in their small society. Avery doesn’t think her life will ever change, and she will always have to live with The Dead around her.
    But then there is a mistake. The Rulers have been hiding something from them. What happens when their society gets attacked?

Softbll4Lyfe Softbll4Lyfe Jan 07, 2013 10:48PM
Wow I'm so glad I found this story it's really good so far and I can't wait to continue reading!!!
Monst3rs Monst3rs Jun 14, 2012 11:18PM
D: Poor Avery! That is beyong cruel what the Ruler did. And I feel so bad for her because her dad :( ...Reading on, voted! :)
queengodiva queengodiva Feb 15, 2012 11:38PM
It is a good start :) I will keep reading to see how better it gets
yourlilRIOT7 yourlilRIOT7 Feb 15, 2012 03:57AM
@CassMalynowsky Aw thanks so much it means a lot!!!
                                    @XxVaniteyWolfxX thank youu
yourlilRIOT7 yourlilRIOT7 Feb 12, 2012 07:29PM
@Rhys_Kelson @el_loco @Sabrina98 @LittleRedFox @BecuzImKool @IvyBell @unknown23 Thanks all of you for your kind comments and critques! It means a lotC:
unknown23 unknown23 Feb 12, 2012 06:19PM
this is very cool and to the point! I will read more since im so into your story now!!!:D